More animatic feedback

Before re- doing my animatic I also received feedback from my teachers on my first draft of my animatic.
The feedback is below.

 I found all these comments more constructive than the ones that I posted earlier.  I was happy with my over score which was 58/70.  The comment about the titles was helpful, and as I am currently finishing my titles on Livetype, I can use this to make sure I do them all properly.